Arcana_Legends

This story is good the concept is very well developed. I really like the reference to Asimov and making an NPC in a game is an extremely interesting choice.

It's pretty well written the starting chapter is pretty strong setting up what seems to be a cool plot about a writer. I can't wait to see more about the MC's past. Keep up the work!

Awesome I'll keep reading!

Thank you!

It's a really good premise, I like the characters and concepts (I'm a sucker for half demon characters) I can't wait to see what the father's story is and the full extent of the characters abilities. The chapters do need some editing but if that type of stuff isn't too bothersome for you then I wholeheartedly recommend you read this.

Starting with a funeral is always a pretty strong start to me especially as an inciting incident. I'm intrigued by the mystery of the protagonists origin and while I have some idea of what she is I'm interested to read more and see how she reacts to her heritage and family. TLDR it's a pretty good read.

This novel does a pretty good job of setting up it's premise, introducing it's main character and most importantly capturing it's genre. It may be another reincarnation/system story but it's gripping due to it's pulp detective noir vibe out the gate. Then immediately upends it by moving in an even more fun direction. If you like the Altered Carbon this novel is shaping up to be right down your alley.

Best review ever

Her being lost in thought is really effective at selling the time passing. I was really worried Shao Wenbo was going to stand her up for a second.