DaukSama

Broo what kind of competition is this ??? too vague

noicee

Pretty good for the first 12 chaps. the only turned off for me is the inconsistency of the phrase like ‘Immortal Family’ to ‘Longevity Family’ n something else cant remember. but overall still good. waiting for the next update

so he’s the one that choosing

THE AWAKENING !!! 🥵

make it more vast > more adventures

nice one i like how everything still shaded by mysteries. making my imagination running wild ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

nice, seems like more things bout to be explore. but the starting of this chap doesnt seems to be on tracks cause of this summoning portal sudden appearance. even the last chap didnt mention anything about it. should mention about what the reward was the explain a little bit

sure 👌🏻