BadGunss_1

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the beginning is really bored 🥱,...............................,.................

I couldn't get past chapter 5, the MC is stupid and we are supposed to believe that he is an extremely experienced and wise Great Wizard?? Spoiler alert for the first 5 chapters. First a kind of "gang" tries to beat him to death on the orders of a Basketball Player, first it's a stupid argument. If it were a cultivation world and the typical young master came, I could let it pass, but, we're talking about the modern world and the nephew of a fucking senator. Second, he is a fucking teenager, what kind of grudge could he have with another teenager, please. The most believable thing would be that it was the basketball team fighting over something stupid and not a damn contract murder. 2: There is no logical reason not to tell your powerful aunt about your almost premature death (unless of course you want revenge yourself) Which would involve using your magical powers to get away with murder. 3 The MC reveals his powers the minute after obtaining them, rendering everything else invalid. I understand that you want to rebel against them and it doesn't seem wrong to me. But please, it was so difficult to last a month or at least be an official magician. Not a minor fact, the MC intends to teach his beloved Tia, proclaiming that he knows countless methods, making the excuse of "I don't know how my magic awakened" completely useless. SUMMARY: The MC has no logic, or is stupid. Boring

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Me parece entretenido de momento, además de que está en español y se agradece...[img=update]

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Me gusta bastante, espero más capítulos.

Finally, someone who says something meaningful and shows criteria, I don't understand how this story has almost 5 stars. (Postscript my first language is not English, please excuse any grammatical errors).

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