Froschmann
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The Frogman provides... sometimes
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Froschmann8minAntwortet auf Shisui34Bian Manwei "I used the pen you gave me to write down the translation"- Froschmann11minKommentiert"Jing Jia got 998 because that's all he could get, Bian Manwei got 1000 because that was all there was to get."
- Froschmann13minKommentiert"Impossible" he spat the coffee out of his mouth. He checked the translated version and was astonished, it usually took weeks and even months before a scroll like this one could get translated.
- Froschmann41minKommentiertHe would leap and maneuver over some branches and he climbed higher and higher up the tree. 'Return to monkey' he thought as he made his way up. Nearly thirty minutes later he had arrived at the top of the tree.
- Froschmann21hKommentiertAnxiously, Sakayanagi Arisu tapped her cane... in frustration.
- Froschmann1dKommentiertJerry J. Anderson...
- Froschmann1dKommentiert
No, it was way too forced. Maybe the method wasn't, but your writing made it so. Just spend a bit more time at a crucial point like this. Some parts are more important than others, especially if you planned it for such a long time. This just seemed like a rushed and forced job, and you probably lost a lot of people/readers due to it.
But I don't think it was forced though. Each scene was reasonable. Malekith and Kurse getting freed from mind stone's effect because of the fall on the ground. Even him getting stabbed from behind when he was exhausted from stopping the ship. - Froschmann1dKommentiert"Oh, Oh, she disappeared! She disappeared!" Pietro shouted excitedly as he watched Jane slip and disappear from the world.
- Froschmann2dKommentiertAfter that Jerry went to his lab to to study more ways to make his new body stronger. Just yesterday, he had enhanced the healing factor's efficiency by 0.27%. It was a huge success.
- Froschmann2dKommentiert"Ow, my back!", his back pain was at it again, since he had removed that si-fi sweat slim belt to bathe.
- Froschmann2dKommentiert4. Genocide: To Prevent or To Enjoy?
- Froschmann2dKommentiertAfter practicing Imago Magus, even his patron saint changed. The usual patron saint can only drive away the soul-eating monster, but when the silver thunderbird released lightning, the soul-eating monster that even real thunder and lightning could not kill died.
- Froschmann3dKommentiertHe is not a Lolita fan, and he has no interest in Hermione, a little girl, for the time being.
- Froschmann3dAntwortet auf SujetoXVII
More like a legendary Item he treats as a rare
Every time he uses up his invisibility cloak, he throws it around, as if it's not a Deathly Hallows but a tattered trench coat. - Froschmann3dKommentiertCyrus had deliberately ignored this point because the original Riddle in the book had also ignored this point. Why did Dumbledore not do anything when he knew about the heir?
- Froschmann5dKommentiertI could feel the heat emanating from her body, the scent of her perfume, just as I could feel my heart racing as I stared at her naked body, lost in the moment. I could see her pulse racing in her neck and her chest heaving with anticipation. I could see wetness glistening in the light as droplets of excitement fell into the ground. I could see her erect clit pulsing as she writhed in expectation.
- Froschmann11dAntwortet auf SR_2027Pheww... Alright, it's time to let go of my dick, and wash my hand. The dude besides me is already staring weirdly at me.