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The author have done a great job in fleshing out characters and the vibe the surroundings carry, there is a certain sense of mystery present too.... the only thing I'd say is the more is less I want to read more and more chapter good work author for trying something which we didn't see often here
I think this novel has a nice potential, its not the kind I usually spot here but it gets you hooks by a simple setting that revolves around a caste of lively characters
I'd say the best thing about this book is the way it portrays stuff without overdoing it unlike many other books in the same genre. Protagonist's personality is relatable and enjoyable. I think this have a nice potential
First two chapters, And I am already hooked, even though I rarely do reviews I felt this one deserved it. The author is good at portraying personalities, setting up the vibe and progressing the plot, I didn't find anything unlikable so far aside from dialogue at end of para a few times.
She'll be relevant in plot further, keep reading
Thanks for motivating me
Ahh this is my first attempt at romcom thanks for being interested
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The story is very pulling, and have a mysterious vibe to it... there are not much dialogues in beginning setting the vibe high, the story unfolds creatively and cleverly leaving me wanting more!! great work author!! will look forward to more