Zherie17

Thank you for this review.

Thank you for this review.

Aw! Thank you so much for this comment. Will read yours if you have/currently writing one when I have time.

Hi. I do not know what this means but thanks.

thank you this comment. will read yours soonest

Thank you for this comment.

Thank you for this comment.

Thank you for reviewing mine. So, here is mine to yours. Story wise, it has an intriguing plot though: 1. Good idea to start the story with an interesting prologue. 2. Good language control. 3. Few edits are needed to but, everything is just fine. Again, thank you and best of luck to you.

Divide the longer paragraphs into two.

Revise this.