Teck877

Might be the perfect cyberpunk fanfiction. Characters are deep, well writen and they genuinly feels real. Their relationship feel as real as possible. World building is perfect. Nothing to say about the pacing. Is is juste great. Despite the low number of chapters, after the ch.50, tey became really long so the novel is not short at all. The only thing i could complain aboit would be the harem and even that is not a problem. Is does never became the central point of the story and just became a thing that evolve naturally from the characters interactions. Just a perfect fanfiction. 5/5 to read, it will be worth it

By far the best fanfiction i ever read Everything is just great Character are awesome, pace is great, the power system is respected and developed, mc is fun to read. This is really just a great novel, period

The best fan fiction I've ever read.

(finished) this has to be one if not the best fanfic i ever read all the characters are nice and well writen. the plots twist are really nice and well foreshadow a morally complex main character there is no romance for the mc mc is just a really nice character to read about the story progression is very well handled everything feel natural. no "becoming stupid for the plot" a nice end overall just perfect

This romance was a problem from the start. They interact a few times, before she betrays him when he was at his lowest. After months of vacation, he returns madly in love and does not blame her while he was made about the fantastic 4. And now he reveals to her the truth about everything. I'm not even mad anymore, just disappointed that such a good story was completely ruined by such a poor quality romance

Thw Writing of this romance is a failure from start to finish. Jay is basically no different than a person who returns with his ex who cheated on him just because he's afraid of ending up alone.

What she did is so much worse than the fantastic 4 and he didn't even react. It just fuels my general hatred of romance in any novel.

Seriously? I should have definitely stopped this novel a long time ago. It's inevitable, every author who wants to insert romance always ends up ruining his novel...

I don't have the words to express how much I hated this chapter. You betray someone while he's literally at his lowest point and comes back as if nothing ever happened?

Ch.130 This is a really great story until the end of the Marvel arc. Although it is a simple shema (unlocking a power, using this new power, upgrading an old power and using the newly upgraded power, etc.) It's fun with a pure evil MC But as soon as he leaves Marvel the quality falls and the next three arcs get worse and worse.