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So far reading to chapter 19 you’ve set a good pace for the development of the story. As far as the world goes from the transition between it’s pretty good, so far it’s focused on the palace which is where he would get all his powers before going to explore the world he’s in I assume. [To explain the world he’s in maybe have it explained by the people he’s going to go against in the palace]~Just a suggestion. Overall as a system story you’w made it in a unique and interesting way! Keep up the good work!!!🫡✊
Honestly between Summoner, Vampir, and this one they have a few similarities but the three have their own unique flow as in character development, world interaction, and a pretty good plot progression. So all the way to this point in my opinion stay with the flow because it’s been a great read!!!! And congrats for the contract✊
So far reading all the books you’ve released have been really good and hopefully this one will also be updated like the others!!! Keep up the great work!!!
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Will there be any continuation of this story or is it on a break? I really liked the eye system and the potential for the characters and hopping for more release of chapters!!!! Really looking to see how it progresses!!! ✊😎
Draconian frost angel?
So far it’s been a great read, looking forward to more of the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
As someone who enjoys reading, this novel so far has been jeeping my intrest. Always looking forward to wht happens next and if it helps this is the frist review I’ve done for a novel. Hopefully you feel better soon!✊