There is no Polish language in Web Novel I think.

Hey JoJ, I think you are writing great, like expected. What do you think about my novel? Could I improve it a little bit?

Thanks for your review. I’ll try to fix the grammar mistakes as much as possible. Have a nice day.

Hello everyone, can you give feedback about the novel? Thanks for the feedbacks and have a nice day.

Good story, author did well when writing the story line. The characters are well explained and there are many details in the story which makes the book good.

Thanks for the review have a nice day

Story continues good.

Thanks for your comment. Have a nice day.

Hello everyone! I’m editing some chapters to fix the missing details of the story and also creating some connection between the chapters. Have a nice day.

I’m glad to hear that. And 30 chapters is amazing waiting for you to update the story :)

You are so right about this thing, I will focus on that but this will take some time. I’m looking foward to see a new chapter in your book, when will you update? :)

You are so right about the improvements, thanks for your help Jo_j!

Then let’s improve the story a little bit more.

You are right about it a lot, let’s see what can I do about this.

Thanks I will try to fix them as much as possible. Have a nice day.

The story is really good, really powerful. The story telling and also the characters are all very well designed. You should read this novel.

First of all the novel is really interesting. It has a good story and also a great character representation. You should read this novel. Also I have to say that author is always trying to improve the story, you can see it with the author comments and other things. Keep up the good work!

When you start reading the novel you notice how good the story line is. The novel has many good details inside about the story. You should read this novel.

The story is really great. Author’s writing style is also really good. The story line on the other hand is magnificent. You should read this book.

Thanks for your review, I’ll try to make it as good as it is like that in every new chapter. Have a nice day.