Jester4Godz

The goblin turned around now holding a wooden club of its own and retaliated by swinging back.

nice

them all sorry

he dodged barely escaping the all

my opinion of what flows better im not a right in anyway Just a native speaker

Hundreds of villagers ran out in fear; Some to put out the blazing storm of fire that was once their homes, others to to save their precious belongings.

you really need an editor or something a lot of the wording is clunky even if correct I am enjoying myself so far though

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ancestor?¿¿???¿

ngl at first I thought this was a souleater fic but im lovin it regardless