Empyrium

I mean, I dont mind bad grammar, but I want to see that it gets better. You even managed to mix up gauntlet with gentle as some comment said. Idk how you managed that. If you improve it, it can go from 5.5/10 to easily 8/10 as far as I am currently. Hope you are able to fix it. PS: Am sure there are apps you can put your chapters in which will look for mistakes, maybe you will find smth?

Story is like many others of the kind, would say often even a bit better. Give it a try, but be warned that there are a lot of grammar mistakes. And author wont fix them or even try it. Read a bit into pay chapters and have to say, if grammar is important for you, dont buy them. If you can ignore those many mistakes go ahead

Only real annoying thing is that author doesnt get better with his grammar and that he doesnt care at all about correcting his mistakes

to mix gentle and gauntlet is insane,

U good, feels like this chapter is killing you. Can understand it, its annoying

have you read further in the story, is it worth paying for it? For now seems grammar and writing style are mid at best. Does author get better or does he stay at his level, which would be sad ngl

Fix your grammar, edit your chapters and your story will get much better then it is right now. Would say 5.5/10 for now

she* Guess this is another of many stories where author wont correct his mistakes

Are you a new write or is this just a translation?

You should work a bit on your grammar