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Unique story plot and development. You could say MC becomes overpowered quickly but it's kept subtle and mc remains humble yet confident just the same. The system isn't the main focus and is more a background support to move the story along and the characters lifestyle and relationship and morals take front seat. You may read many chapters in between each system skill use.

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To Author, is this a spin-off or a short story prequel or sequel of your other bartending book. if they are connected how? and what's ur recommendation for order of reading the two separate(but Possibly related) works for the best reading enjoyment

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there will b a redemption arc to bring them closer and being the catalyst to them becoming an item.

golden ratio would create a gap in strength and ability between the MC and his guildmates this would cause laziness and dependability because they would feel a lack of skills and unneeded which would undermine the reason of the true elites guild as well as the MCs consistent use of skills in every battle and tasks so far making the mana skill a more obvious and result choice moving forward for character growth and story arc

Glad you finally brought Fatty back but should have been done earlier because of the promise they made to join whoever made a guikd first. This promise was made after he overcame his internal struggle and repaired the friendship. Because he wasn't brought in at the beginning of guild development it took away from the initial scene and character growth where Fatty could have helped develop the non combat aspect of the guild instead of wasting the position on an NPC allowing for further growth of MC and his repayment of the 30k loan and strengthening that story arc of his true best friend.

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