VirginiaFlamingo

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2020-12-11 BeigetretenUnited States

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VirginiaFlamingoa month ago
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Wonder story!! Warm & fuzzy feelings. Good dialogue & character development. I love this author!
The Forgotten Princess Rose
Geschichte · Violet_167
VirginiaFlamingo2 months ago
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Such a fun book! I didn’t see the plot twists coming, good work! Good character development and dialogue.
High Society: Welcome to the Inner Circle
Fantasie · Violet_167
VirginiaFlamingo2 months ago
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An excellent story, well woven. Great character development & dialogue. No loose ends, but still room for other characters to find their HEA. Looking forward to Tiny Psalm’s next book —she’s my new favorite!
HATING HER KING
Geschichte · Tiny_Psalm
VirginiaFlamingo2 months ago
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Defying ways
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HATING HER KING
Geschichte · Tiny_Psalm
VirginiaFlamingo2 months ago
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Chapter 94 & 95 are the same chapter, duplicates.
"But all men are powerless." Alexander said softly. She had rendered him powerless since the day she came to the castle, stealing his joy unless she was near.
HATING HER KING
Geschichte · Tiny_Psalm
VirginiaFlamingo2 months ago
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Hi Tiny Psalm! I am in love with your stories! But I wanted to point this out to see if this what what you really meant to say. I’ve seen it several times in this book. Defile means to make unclean. Defy means to stand against something, someone’s authority or command. Defiling is the process of making unclean, or destroying the cleanness or goodness. Defying is the act of taking a stand against something or someone.
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HATING HER KING
Geschichte · Tiny_Psalm
VirginiaFlamingo2 months ago
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Great story and very good writing overall.
LOVING HER DUKE
Geschichte · Tiny_Psalm
VirginiaFlamingo4 months ago
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A part of *him* not her. Him is male, Her is female.
"Vanished?" Ronald de Regulus frowned, yet a part of her was no longer surprised by the result of this matter. In just a year, three people who betrayed Evelynn somehow disappeared. Was it truly a coincidence?
Eve's Gambit
Fantasie · B_Mitchylle
VirginiaFlamingo4 months ago
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*He* was currently massaging her legs. Not *she*
"Drakmor was said to be a deity," Maximilian said. She was currently massaging Eve's legs. He volunteered to do this because the shoes and clothing in this place were new to Eve. Instead of using magic to ease her pain, he insisted on massaging her instead. "Deities do not die," Maximilian said. For some reason, Eve could feel the certainty in his words.
Eve's Gambit
Fantasie · B_Mitchylle
VirginiaFlamingo4 months ago
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Vamping king? I love this story but please fix typos
"The Vamping King Octavius was well known for his peaceful approach. The vampires are less as they cannot procreate. To make themselves stronger, they rely on their connections and relationships with the other races. I would not be surprised if the Sylvarian King owes him a favor or two. That is the reason why they would never miss a chance to flatter the vampires. As for King Aldric…." Counselor Windemere sighed. "It is still better to be prepared. We do not want the council and the Elders raising even more questions about this matter."
Eve's Gambit
Fantasie · B_Mitchylle