drakal77
An aspiring author and avid enjoyer of lores and mythology behind anything xianxia, xuanhuan, western and indian fantasy.
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drakal772yrVerschicktAS OF CHP 38 Nothing Seems Cringe, Story flows smoothly without logical flaws and disturbing immersion by something stupid. MC and Other Character Personalities are good as it is. The pace of story is superb , without filler and fast paced but not too much fast paced. World-Building is Simple yet Mysterious and things and clans are shown step by step. Wish Well to this Book, this should get more Views.
- drakal773yrAntwortet auf TheHermitKingCh 3 Yellow Springs Road
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i like the way mc thinks.haha.
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it is indeed.
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Amen to That
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Fuck the Simps. literally , so that they know its not worth it.
If simping was a plague before the apocalypse, then this damned change of times allowed those idiots to prove that no simp was true simp before. Donating money to have their name spoken on the stream? How about beating a guy to the border between life and death just because he dared to sit beside the girl they liked and were never bound to even talk with? - drakal773yrKommentiert
Yes, i thought it was a potential SHIP, but now i get the feeling that she might not be the one . i like the later aspect where they go their own ways, But very few novels manage to pull that off. lets hope .
Sadly, I could no longer share this adorable naivety. Not with my family to take care off, not with the system waiting for me in the basement and not with how fragile the current improvement of my mother's health was. - drakal773yrKommentiert
Damn! so much new chapters. is this what you said by slow release. lol. Keep it coming.
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So far everything is good and enjoyable. do keep on. also try to stock your chapters and publish chapter daily instead of publishing 3,4 chapter at once as it may be difficult to come up with new chapters daily....this something i learnt later too , but apparently it helps to gain traction of the novel.
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you should have put a space here and wrote from line below.
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BRUH ! his mom is fallen so how is he pure bred Abyssal demon
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Hip Hip Hurray! Bro keep on doing your work!
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Cool. I also started just few days ago. Lets persevere !
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Bruh i feel u
- As of 21.05.2020, this novel will be turning premium. That means that all the new chapters and quite a bit of the already published ones will be locked behind a paywall. - drakal773yrKommentiertCh -3 On the time for writing the chapter and required research
- drakal773yrKommentiertWhile the system in the first place is just a plot tool that allows me to ignore some of the more technical aspects of the novel - like explaining how the trade worked back then, and trust me, it is a nightmare to learn about, not to speak about making it interesting enough to warrant putting it into the story. What's more, I'm not an engineer, hence the amount of work I would have to input just in order to explain the way in which a single mechanism of let's say fermentation barrel would work... WOuld require not only continuous googling the correct words in my native language and then translating it to English, before trying to make the sentence look nice and be actually comprehensible to a normal reader but a lot more work I'm too tired to explain.
- drakal773yrAntwortet auf Suigetsu_yolo_9736
More things including the hints of the history and politics of the whole world will be explained along with worldbuilding and more in-depth nature of his parents in the later chapters so I hope you give this novel a try. thanks for your suggestion tho i will try to focus on those parts.
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