SutaTeika

a skeleton can burp?

this is the most unreasonable description ever. I imagine some ghost rider stuff, but is the author talking like a ghostly face rather than a simple energy layer?

Amazing fan fic, i myself am not a fan of harem but this is just too good. I hope the author keeps updating and doesn't make it paid any time soon

bro...

What spider has eaten a chicken

Lots of grammar mistakes and tons of bad wording, along with the story jumping the gun often and having it's pacing increase drastically. Characters are pretty well designed however for a lot of important characters the author forgets how he described them even with his knowledge of the world from reading through it, changing how they act and making them entirely different people from how they were initially described. (not as in seeing into the characters but more as in he's changing the characters themselves). The world background is the worst part, if i could give it a lower rating i would. There is almost to explanation of the world, like how it seems to be a fantasy world with modern and maybe even sci-fi elements within.

NOW IT'S SQUARING IT

What has happened to simple maths? doubling now is 7x ?

It sure would be strange if that twig were to instead reincarnate as... a Stick?

wrong answer, the right one is china