Jay_Corbitt_0777

im done, I just can't read this anymore. it had sooooooo much potential to be a good book, but no one would be that stupid or naive. not only did he not use his stats he for the second time wasted them. the story is just to unbelievable to stay interested.

he lives in a technological advanced world and doesn't know how stats work........... he put his first 2 stats into perception which he didn't. eed at all at the moment and nit strength....... why? seriously why? He has been beaten to the point of near death for years and could barley finish the exercises and he was just like oh well I'll just put these 2 points Into the Stat I don't understand, even though I literally just ready a very clear straight forward description, and not into the one thing I need right now........

it's a great concept and honestly my only complaint is the main characters attitude. I'm all for low profile but he doesn't do anything. he keeps talking about living but all he really does is exist. He just sits by and watches others get abused, it's hard to support and enjoy a book when the MC is a waste of space and an asshole who doesn't even try to enjoy life.

at first I really liked it however lately I've been noticing a trend on this sites books. all the MC's either become arrogant assholes or even start out that way. im not saying I like an over bearing nice guy but it's really hard to enjoy a book when the main character is more of a douchebag than the people he fights or is ridiculously petty and greedy. Especially when they are committing the same acts against others that was done to them. Just makes me immediately delete the book and lose Interest.

it's a good book but the repetitive information is annoying. I. almost every chapter you see his status information which takes up a large chunk of the reading and writing and you have his abilities explained again. some explanation helps move the story along but it makes it boring when it'd the same info over and over again. also I appreciate it's being translated but the translation is very rough.

I was really inot this book, one of the few good ones on here. sad that he stopped writing.

not exactly being discrete or stealth taking out a patrol. kinda failed at the start.

I agree, it's hard to get behind him with his attitude. Plus I just feel like he isn't really using his minions well, he hasnt even tried to make a magic user, no arrow users, or spear users. But the thing that is really making me lose I terest is the dialogue. everytime she says okiee it just makes me cringe.

ok I'm gonna sound petty here, the only reason I stopped reading this book and didn't give it 4-5 stars is because the character says "yosh" I literally cringe anytime someone uses that word in a book. that or they try to say the growl or roar of an animal Instead of describing it. it just immediately makes me think I'm reading a book for a child.

it starts off really great, a few plot holes but not big or bad, but tha. later on they start happe ing more and more, like how he is supposedly as powerful as a high level knight ut he has to poison people to win a fight eve. though he is also highly trained in a lost sword art but can't take on two low level guards because it's not worth his tike to rescue some slaves even though tactically speaking it would be better to have multiple people running in different directions to give a false trail.... just kinda lost me. Story feels forced.