Flavio_Scavone

Did you even read the story bro😭😭

Great, can't wait for the slice of life and romance to actually start, just make sure you don't burnout posting 2 chapters a day

I think they should have some doubts, not a full blown reveal however, It's too early

This chapter was fucking great, especially the ending

Nano Machine and the sequel Descent of the Demon God are part of a larger web novel universe written by the same author, so you would have to read plenty of novels just to get the lore knowledge necessary to write a good fic. As far as powerscaling goes, Nano Machine MC was able to, at the end of Descent of the Demon God, move while time was stopped and split in half an attack capable of destroying all of Asia with a sword strike, so yeah the PS goes very high

I think I popped a couple of blood vessels just from reading this chapter

Not a criticism, more like a suggestion to make writing these action chapters more simple. You could, for example, use the slice of life arcs to research grappling and mma in preparation for the action arcs

You said you had a hard time writing this chapter because you had to research fighting moves, you said so in the notes at the end of the chapter. I said that It would have been better to do the research before you started to write the fic, or before you got to the more high-tier, technical fights like the one in this chapter

I believe you should have done your research before writing a fic about Lookism and Reality Quest Bro😂😂 Not after

Why does this read like a cheap chinese novel