Salem_Zaed

MC feel more like a background character, didn’t really do anything useful, even though he was supposedly a leader in his previous life and was betrayed he still give the village especially Tobirama too much credit. His father is madara’s disciple but is useless and has no real use from the start. Too many things to point out.

Not really nomu should have been defeated once it’s brain was destroyed it is the weakness it have, also the author nerf the mc too much.

I agree it’s stagnant and overstretched

It more about the story is stagnant, it’s not really moving maybe slowly like a snail. Overstretched dialogue that lead to nowhere,

It’s not about this, Naruto wether you like it or not is a ninja world fighting is the nature there also the story didn’t move all they did is just yapping and there was no real effects for this. I also liked the politics but at some point it’s just too much overstretched. Like why not replace Fugaku already, there is no reason until now, Fugaku is actually dragging them down more than shisui especially since shisui is still young here he doesn’t have much say. Mc is supported by the elders and a whole faction,

You have ruined the story unfortunately, the lack of action and constant yapping ruined the whole thing

I gave it another chance but the drag is too much, also there is no worthy action in the whole thing maybe a few skrimish every 15+ chapters, sometimes more. This is a story of ninja man fights are the essence here not politics, if you had made him a noble or from the daimyo family then fine but he is an Uchiha, a ninja. Also It became annoying at this point that all he does is yapping in every chapter, if you are gonna do something do it already don’t just keep yapping about it and then retreat. Also the timeline get messed up a little but fine no problem. For reason the Obito Ren and Kakashi situation happened in the most dog way possible.

Honestly it’s good but it has a very big issue that is progression of the story, things that can be done in one chapter are stretched to 3 or 4 chapters, sometimes an unnecessary flashback, the flashback come out of nowhere the previous chapter reaches a climax and suddenly a flashback. Thanks but I think that’s it for me

He should be between 14&15 as that’s the age of the main cast at the start

There is barely any interaction between characters, hell there is no character, the whole thing is like a narrative no conversation no personality it just plain oh I did this today and that and this I didn’t feel anything, it just word count that it