I live to write and share. Fanfictions on webnovel, and original works under pseudonyme d'elfe as a contractor. I am also a published author in France, http://www.delfyne-gwenn.fr/index.php/fr/
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She is moderately skilled because she ended up fighting twice as a gladiator. But it's still not enough to master a sword, and the gladius is using very different techniques as well.
Good catch ! My scenario had changed so much that I forgot to remove this one. The fact is that she didn't :) Thank you for pointing it out. Hopefully, the rest has been smoothed out properly.
Typical Mulder naïveté here... he's insufferable, right ?
Thank you for your comment, but er, what did you mean by it ?
I didn't understand what you meant here, I admit.
Yes, she definitely needs it
Thank you so much :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.
So ! If you're still around, 'toeing the line' is completed now :) I added the last few chapters. I've been rereading your comments and spend such a nice moment. Thanks again.
maaaaaaaybe ?
OK. I get what you say. That novels are not the same quality as published work on webnovel. You should probably know that the author requested pointers on the forum, and that's why I spent time giving her professional advice in the first place. Hence my remark on the 'show don't tell'.