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I really enjoyed the story so far, but I think you should decrease in the points he gets from grimorio. Make it more difficult to achieve because at this rate he will have many powers and will not be able to use even half. It would take a long time to develop all of them on screen, at least. Thanks for the chapter<3 (Google Translate)
Sindella calls Giovanni for the surname in comics? This is bothering me in reading. I find myth strange. (Google translates)
I hope Ash remains with his ideals, most of the fanfics the protagonist is some kind of hunter he ends up softening with supernatural beings, because of the plot and in the end up making friends with them. I hope this will not happen here, I am enjoying the personality of MC.(google translate)
Good thing he died, imagine living after that.
Ok, I really don't like chat group system, but I saw that there is no harem in the tags and the pairing is with Jean Gray and that interested me. (I'm writing it before reading Chapter 1)
Seriously, I hope he develops organic webs. I always found it much cooler than the Web-Shooters, and the organic web would probably work with its power of adaptation.
I really wish the consequences of their fights remained, but they'll probably rewind time... too bad. But thanks for the chapter. <3
It's been a month since the author posted anything on QQ, he's probably dealing with real life.
I'm following it on QQ and it's very good.
Vandal's plan must be the Godkiller sword, right? she was created by Hephaestus.