Sicario_1011

Thx for chapter

The other reviews have to be bought. This story isn’t crazy what so ever. Mid is all it is. Forced plot holes cliches all that it is. It’s not a crazy captivating story whatsoever just something meh to read while you are bored.

Thanks for the chapter

Still thinks it’s lazy writing just making things the same as canon

This is lazy writing he just followed book route for no reason

The translation is bad you called misty Stephenie, there’s a city called girl city, there’s many mistakes in just one chapter. I recomend you use gramerly it should be able to help some. I’m not gonna do mental gymnastics to understand a fanfic

The translation is honestly horrible, if the author fixes it up the story would probably be really good. It is a headache just trying to read it.

Thanks for the chapter

Bout to report for copy right with cd project red