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Tranquilo Moreno si quieres mas detalles lee la novela Tales of Demons , pero si no quieres vete a la mierda perra¡¡¡¡ y deja de joder porque es difícil escribir una novela pero que vas a saber tú.... ser mortal :v
se me pone los pelos de punta por demasiado cringe
Al inicio use el traductor de ingles, pero me cambiaba varias palabras asi que decidí hacerlo con mi idioma original, lo siento mucho pero recién estoy estudiando apara aprender ingles
If you're right, that's why I made a chapter where Maximus and the other Spartans went crazy for the death of one of his close friends unjustly and kills all living beings in the city at the end I put the Greek gods and the gods of that world , I deleted it because I felt it was too exaggerated, so I changed it, But I am still thinking of a place where to install the Spartans and re-fuse the Kingdom of Sparta and expand its culture and add part of others so that they reach perfection.
Thanks for your comments, the weapons of the Spartans in the war were under the blessing of Maximus's war heart who made them of pure gold and anti magic that's why they are strong, the orc soldiers only had a simple armor of heavy steel that's why they were massacred and the magicians who were in the border city were only common magicians or magic students, they were not war magicians and the only one who carried mithril was the prince atlas because it is a very rare material and the personality of the protagonist mmm I will only tell you That will be cruel if necessary. I don't want to be a psychopath, so sometimes I introduce comedy. I'll fix that and specify more from now on, please be patient it's my first novel: v
If you're right, I'll change it too, I felt it seemed too exaggerated, thanks for the recommendation.
In the future there will be Greek, Egyptian and Nordic gods and later capable of other cultures, I'm sorry for yesterday I felt that I was speeding up the plot too much
In the future there will be Greek, Egyptian and Nordic gods and later capable of other cultures, I'm sorry for yesterday I felt that I was speeding up the plot too much
Sorry I tried to use google translate but it changes several words, I am studying English to write but it will take me a while. :c