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Me waiting for the next chapter
I like your to the point style, but I would like some more chapters, where you explain his exploits, rather than just saying, that X happened and Y is the result. Don't stretch it for like 5 chapters, but this is your story, so do it however you want to.
Why did the guy kill them tho? Just get a divorce and move on. Why did he even get married in the first place? He makes no fking sense! I want answers, not death! Don't use him as a dumb plot point and then throw him away! Hop to it, make a believable explanation to this paradoxical existence!
Good luck and please be quick about it. I want some more.