A_Valentine

Its definitely a slow burn kind of book I'm going for, it is a mystery after all. After I hit my first 10k words, I'm gonna slow down my updates to once or maybe twice a week to allow breathing room when I take up a job. I put a lot of work into these characters, having written with them before which naturally led to character development. I'm proud of my work and quality of writing can always use improvements.

I don't know if you're first language is english, but either way you could use some grammar, punction and general improvement. Grammarly is a good resource if you're an english native or fluent. Overall, its a general zombie apocalypse with the anime tropes someone who expect.

I really liked the indeoth description of the character snd his environment in the first chapter, it really set a scene for me. I personally struggle to imagine scenes and need help with it. The grammar could use work and you could definitely benefit running it through or writing it in grammarly before publishing it.

they sighed,

they sighed*

the eldest*

If English is not your first language let me know, but the grammar definitely got on nerves and I couldnt really understand the plot. Once they were claiming they cant kill her, but then attack her, then she has a guardian angel, its so confusing to me.

wow, I really loved this book. I really enjoyed this book and honestly, I hope this continues. Of course the grammar can always use work but nothing grammarly cant fix. Such a good book

I really like it. reminds me a lot of my MC

Grammar could use a lot of improvements as well as proper punctuation. Their wasnt much background information I picked up on, the character design is good and I didnt really understand the story plot, at first it was high stakes, then it was something else. Throughly confused