Willem_Trialmont

And I see you're listed as a fan of your own work. And what a might work it is. Two chapters, one is padding for word count, the other a mediocre setup. Aaaand the fic is already on hiatus. Seriously, the hard work can be seen from a mile away. Don't break that arm patting yourself on the back.

i'll give it a look

another contrivance for a wish fulfillment harem lame and boring why so many people defend the "artistic" choice you made here as some sort of deep dive into a the darker side of humanity instead of as a contrived low-effort justification for harem wankery is beyond me you I understand, them not so much

the idiom is: to make or break

That would be true if he hadn't already done that more than once already. However, even if he hadn't, it's a pointless edgelord monologue. This is one of the things better shown instead of told. It should be easily deduced by the reader from the actions of the character what their 'morals' are.

To make a long story short, an interesting concept but terrible execution. No regard for punctuation or interpunction makes the story unreadable. Filled with unnecessary childish notes that break immersion. Just as I was starting to think the author's going to try and make an interesting deviation from the norm (for this site) he doubles down on the cliches. And while on the subject of cliches, let's end with one. I expected nothing, and yet I was still disappointed. P.S. It honestly boggles the mind how this has a rating of 4.5

if he's so passionate about physics to double dip on his master degree to such a retarded degree why would he ever start teaching highschool ethics? so stupid

the **** is a double masters he can have a bachelors degree, a masters or a Ph.d. in physics or a two masters, one in physics and another in something else

boring and unnecessary this is the fourth or fifth reference to his 'misanthropic' nature. you don't TELL us this you SHOW it to us.

The story is bad, there's nothing more to it. The author has a mediocre grasp of the English language and has an annoying habit of writing meandering redundant sentences. The cannon characters' characterizations are poorly executed, to the point that I'm wondering if he's had anything more than a passing familiarity with the material. The main character is a bad guy a villain if you will, not an anti-hero. He murders and tortures people as a first resort, and only cares for his own benefit. His supposed care for his family is shallow, barely skin deep. And the dialogue waffles between barely believable and so edgy I'd have it cut my lawn. Pass if you value your time.