oktubre1

LMAO

good to have something to read. It gets boring the more you read as the protagonist keeps winning without any real challenge. Another thing is the lack of events outside of football that make reading entertaining.

Fuck you

waiting for the next update

7 months without update. Did they abandon him?

This looks like the fifth chapter, not the first.

Thanks for the chapters

I don't mind this turn of events, but was it necessary to use 4 chapters for a trivial sex scene?

I don't understand how selling a couple of fruits and vegetables at a very low market price would make a big difference in the north.

He abandoned it in the fifth chapter, I don't understand why this amateur work has such a good rating. The only good thing about this book was its stability in updates, otherwise it leaves something to be desired.