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The story is interesting and introduces the characters pretty well. I like the snall interaction between the unknown man and the succubus, and how the plot unfolds from there. I wish you the best on your book author 👍

The premise is interesting and the characters are well described and introduced. I look forward to seeing how you develop your story and good luck! 😊

Premise is interesting and the characters are well described and written. Though there's some grammatical errors, the flow of the story is good. I wish you the best on your book author 😊

Great story you have there, and the premise is quite interesting. I can't wait for more chapters to come out. I wish you the best on your book!

Great story, and the premise is quite interesting. I can't wait for more chapters to come out. I wish you the best on your book nd look forward to further aspects of this story.

Interesting premise and the characters are well described and written. However, there are a few grammatical errors which could be worked on. Otherwise good job!

Premise is interesting and the characters are well described and written. I wish you the best on your book author and look forward to seeing more chapters released.

Great premise, the world building is great and the characters are well described. Your English is well written and brings out the true potential of this story. I can't wait to see how you do on your book. Good luck!

An interesting premise. The characters are well described and written. Good job on the book. I wish you the best on your book author 👍👍👍👍

Premise is interesting and the characters are well described in the story. Overall the world building is also good. I wish you the best on your book author 😊