jojojo66

10+ half centuries .47 wicket.drop from u19 cricket because he can not controll his pace.dale stein 28% completion can make him one of the best in u-19 championship.dropping him because he cannot control his speed is just forced story development .

Writing quality is good.but character development is bad.Mc doesn't have to win every match.where is the struggle.and you finish matche very quickly.if some one doesn't know cricket he will not understand anything.And a bit rushed.slow down a little bit

yes yes yes yes

so u 19 at 14 ? man you should increase his age at least 14 .u-19 at 14years old no matter how talented you are you will lose out because of stamina, endurance

isn't he supposed to fast baller ?

i write this 2 year ago 😆

anyone help what is scp exactly

don't compare her to minato lol

mc can use yang yin chakra beofre he can graduate from academy.where is the training arc.as he didnt get any wish from god he is just normal people in naruto.so he at least should struggle doing things like that.and merging two chakra nature idnt that easy if that was easy orochimaru would have all the genkai by himself

great chapter. great writting.don't drop it keep going