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Wongani_Kayira_671511mthAntwortet auf JibberflexThat seems plausible
Aizawa widened his eyes. 'When did he mark me?' His eyes grew even wider when he realized. 'When he blocked elbow, he put his tag on me in that split second exchange.'- Wongani_Kayira_67151yrKommentiert
its a very good story and thanx for the chapter but I have one request, please remove the multiverse travel thing please it will make this boring because the one punch man universe is already among one of the strongest in the animes world's so adding multiverse travel is just too much
Ch 5 A message from God? - Wongani_Kayira_67151yrKommentiert
Phantom
'My hero name... What should I pick?' Naruto delves deep into thought, same as the other students. - Wongani_Kayira_67151yrKommentiert
gonna imagine as mineta
Hmmm... so it's pretty much an unpenetrable fortress. Excellent. Whilst Cortana was explaining to me about Mt. Olympus, I was already running towards that direction. Something also popped into my mind. I haven't seen myself yet. Thinking this, I bought a mirror from my shops section and look at myself. I had almost like a diamond shaped face. I had a strong jaw line, pointy chin, my brown eyes, nose and mouth had western features to it. I also had a 5 o'clock shadow going on and thick eyebrows whilst I had a set of black hair that goes to my shoulder. My hair had braids here and there with hair on my left and right side braided and going around my head and ending into one braid. I had a tanned body that is also so defined with packed and compressed muscles that it looks like somebody sculpted my body. Overall, I looked like what a Greek God should look like. My height is also hovering somewhere between 7'5 to 8ft tall. - Wongani_Kayira_67151yrKommentiert
Thor
Guys who do you think Our mc's love interest should be comment here - Wongani_Kayira_67151yrKommentiertCh 6 RAVENFROW CITY
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pagani
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how about knull
i opened my eyes only to find myself on a battlefield, bodies spread all around me, screams could be eared, in the area, and only a man could be seen in front of me, his whole body bleeding and a strange armor covering his body, and an enormous sword on his hand. - Wongani_Kayira_67151yrKommentiert
how about Jean
"If you haven't got the point yet…" She giggled, approaching me with a disappointed look, "Well, there is no point in explaining it," and with that said, she killed me, ending Hydra once and for all, and leaving me with one question, just who the hell was her? - Wongani_Kayira_67151yrVerschickt
I am not going to lie the novel is pretty good except that you need to hurry on with the story not just narrate what is the past and don't go and try to take the same route as the author mentioned in the novel because people will lose interest this is not one piece dude but overall your novel has started sucking ass at chapter 10 but it's pretty good it has its own uniqueness
- Wongani_Kayira_67151yrAntwortet auf ArifuretaForever
read my mind
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - Wongani_Kayira_67151yrKommentiertCh 3 Chapter 3
- Wongani_Kayira_67151yrKommentiertCh 9 Quirk Apprehension Test
- Wongani_Kayira_67151yrKommentiertCh 7 Training and Talk
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Typical Chinese mc
His face is very handsome, described as the most handsome Saiyan in history, it can be said to be very vivid. - Wongani_Kayira_67152yrKommentiert
he should still remember
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add broly dude he would be a good challenge for the mc but don't increase his pl to bullshit levels like fighting beerus and winning when he still young
1.should I include Brolly, there is only supposed to be one legendary saiyan every 1,000 years and he is non canon.