This story, to start has a very gripping introduction. It pulls off the elements it wants to do quite well , and it shouldnt be overlooked that it has a great potiental going for it. It’s coherent, interesting , and has a lack of many errors. Good Novel! 💎

See this! I just gifted the story: Sword

Yo this is nice. Cool style. Cover art is interesting and minimal. I think your plot is fun and overall keeps people interested , good times

This novel is fantastic, everyone should give it a chance, because those that do will be blessed with great storytelling and a great style of writing.

i can’t tell if this is meant to be an ironic system story, but i do enjoy it lol. also panties are wild

An Among us story with genuine creativity. I was a silent reader, but it’s looking like this story wont update any more, which is disappointing. Genuinely good character development, and a story that’d make me feel compassion for the characters as the story goes on. Best of luck on your other project right now Author, hopefully this story is considered for the future!

Overall A really nice read. Detailed and eloquent writing, very nice characters and a great world overall. Interested in where the story goes, best of luck.

Very well made. Definitely worth giving a good try. I enjoy reading the protagonist, and the stories mystery, and romance aspects are really well made. I hope for this to be updated more and to eventually conclude in a nice way. Very good job, author!

Very well written, an overall good read with flow that I enjoy. This story shows promise in the future, and i’ll be sure to keep my eye on it. Best of luck to your writing!

I enjoyed this! The characters are well described and the story is headed in a good direction! It’s hard to fully review when a series is newer and shorter, but i’ll definitely be checking up on this.

The atmosphere you set up in these opening chapters is amazingly detailed!