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With his ability to manipulate metal (like Magneto), he could have stopped the bullet. That's with the thought that he has the insight, strength and ability.
Yet he sat on his hands and made no attempt to inform his clients about the recent personnel changes and to beware deception. Future Mob Boss?..not seeing it yet...
Unless this dude has a family or even someone he is committed too, then that statement by the queen was stupid. He could simply switch sides and cause all kinds of problems.
I have not written a Novel so it's easy to be a critic. Yet in the last chapter, the Warden had died. Why are we being fed filler for an action that has already happened?
Sounds sus!
I respect that you aren't going to write your book the way the readers want and that it's your way or the highway! That's exactly how it should be!
Someone should look into the woman's past. See where she really comes from and if her "memory" is real or a Nephilim ploy to get rid of another strong competitor for the Earth faction.
This is the Light Magic Institute and this professor is one of the best or acknowledged for his achievements. So why would they groan with such an opportunity to learn from one of the greats?
I find this book to be intriguing and descriptive. I feel that the author has a good vision and has been able to display it through his writing. This could be a very good novel if continued.
Stop monologuing and run!!