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thedarkmage

thedarkmage

Lv1

I am a geek.

2020-10-12 BeigetretenGlobal
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  • thedarkmage
    thedarkmage10mth
    Kommentiert

    STOP BULLYING TATSUMI

    Ch 30 Chapter 17: Aftermath
    Saikō no Chitsujo
    Aktion · The_Shadow_Author1
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  • thedarkmage
    thedarkmage10mth
    Kommentiert

    first to comment ..yes

    Ch 27 Hiatus
    Saikō no Chitsujo
    Aktion · The_Shadow_Author1
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  • thedarkmage
    thedarkmage1yr
    Kommentiert

    this has potential to be the best arc yet❤️❤️

    "Arata-chan you meanie," she pouted, nocking an arrow and drawing her bow, a crimson mist floating around it.
    Saikō no Chitsujo
    Aktion · The_Shadow_Author1
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  • thedarkmage
    thedarkmage1yr
    Antwortet auf R_F_T_S

    thank you Rfts-nim🤲

    ChaosVerse
    Fantasie · thedarkmage
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  • thedarkmage
    thedarkmage2yr
    Verschickt

    Solid start up, dialogue seems good, and the story seems to be heading toward an interesting premise. Fix your narration sha... It will continue to impede your writing style. It will keep ruining the experience

    Dieses Buch wurde gelöscht.
  • thedarkmage
    thedarkmage3yr
    Kommentiert

    Much better dialogue... The characters are well written

    Ch 2 Prologue : The Chosen
    HELLSGATE : TALES OF A DIVINE WAR
    Fantasie · R_F_T_S
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