John_Smalley_8471

did the translator fall asleep on the job?

really my only complaint is that the translation is rough! But even that isn't bad just mediocre! over all congratulations on a great story!

I believe there is a typo here maybe but I believe the second use of the name "fez" should actually be "Logan" I apologize if I'm wrong

to be honest it was such a minor inconvenience as to be negligible that was just the only thing I thought that could possibly improve the writing ...ps thank for the response I think this is the first response from a writer that wasn't either outright or borderline monosyllabic

I loved this story really the only complaint I could possibly have is I feel like it needs to be proof read one more time for small typos other than that I hope there is a sequel

this book is great it's a fairly quick read but the characters are rich and Interesting with just a drop of romance just enough to say it's there with out affecting the story

A great story thats well written and easy to follow. Full of characters you want to know more about! I simply cannot wait for more. What other powers are there?

simply fantastic it's full of everything action, adventure, romance, intrigue and a TALKING crow! I'm mean come on what more could you possibly need?

more more more! can't get enough!