Blacklight_sun
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I think I might be a okay writer and I hope people will comment on my story
2020-10-11 BeigetretenGlobal
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Blacklight_sun1mthAntwortet auf HugeAckman696969I've been falling for 30 minutes
Batman and Kasumi look at the boy who is lying on the floor for a moment. Then they look at each other and Kasumi simply shrugs. Batman shrugs as well and creates a black portal underneath Damien, making him fall through it.- Blacklight_sun1mthKommentiert
hey can we get this Batman a seat on the round table of black Air Force activity?
The entire planet of Apokolips ... exploded. - Blacklight_sun3mthAntwortet auf C_K_3132
let's bring in the stage of six paths and his Mommy dearest
With the help of Enma, maybe he could even take down the opponent. - Blacklight_sun4mthKommentiert
thanks for the chapter but remember to take care of yourself first
I had a bad day and couldn't study properly. So this is what came out of it. I might post another chapter this week. We'll see. - Blacklight_sun4mthKommentiert
I'm going to say this right now always take care of yourself first and then think about what your fans want
Greetings. I just wanted to let you know that I have exams next week, so I won't update any of my stories for a while. - Blacklight_sun4mthKommentiert"Very well… It is time for you to resume your training."
- Blacklight_sun4mthKommentiert"HAHAHAHAHAHAHA I'M A F*CKING GENIUS!!"
- Blacklight_sun4mthKommentiertIs this getting a bit too violent? Lol as if I care about what anyone thinks. This chapter was a blast to write.
- Blacklight_sun4mthKommentiertComing from Batman that was one of the coldest lines imaginable. Because as he said that, Batman's aura seemed to become darker and very threatening. It wasn't any anime-type stuff it was just the feeling he gave everyone. It was like standing in front of Darth Vader as a Stormtrooper ... you knew you were utterly f*cked.
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you did a really good job with it
This was hard to write. While I did have an amazing trailer to help me with this, it isn't a carbon copy. Show some love please. - Blacklight_sun4mthKommentiert"Hello beautiful." Said Sokka, swaggering his steps towards the voluptuous waterbender "Sokka. Southern Water Tribe, I can't help but feel amazed by your strength and skill… you must be the strongest waterbender in the world!"
- Blacklight_sun4mthKommentiertThere was no more pain in his severed arm, there was no more fear of Madara, there was no more respect towards the Fire Lord and there was no more cruelty towards Zuko, during his final moments all that Zhao could feel was… Distress…
- Blacklight_sun4mthKommentiert'Foolish boy… at least that Firebender had the guts to stare me in the eye and make me feel fear, Kaliya at least had the guts to challenge me to prove her point… these two are just… disappointing…'
- Blacklight_sun5mthKommentiertDiana's compassion and loyalty towards her family as well as humans in general, give her a big weakness which can be exploited. Kidnapping her mother or multiple Amazons and holding them hostage, should be effective. This plan is one I favour since it also involves EM (Emotional Damage), the most effective weapon there is.
- Blacklight_sun5mthAntwortet auf Vidhan_Bhardwaj
that is true psychological torture is fun
"...going to commit a war crime." - Blacklight_sun5mthAntwortet auf Vidhan_Bhardwaj
too quick for my taste
"...going to commit a war crime." - Blacklight_sun5mthKommentiertShe discovered now that seeing him in vídeos and seeing him personally are two entirely different things. In her proud brain, she still thought that she was on the same level as him.
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and this is why immortality truly is the curse
Dieser Absatz wurde gestrichen. - Blacklight_sun5mthKommentiert
keep summer safe~
So we have driving fuel, energy to power the defences and Terrain Tools. After all of that, it was time to add the weaponry. I created something I called smart guns. They did what their name suggests. They were guns that would only hit what I told them vocally. - Blacklight_sun5mthAntwortet auf Lomyril
one sentence "keep summer safe"
The way I did that was to design my car as a key that would open the portal to this floor. That way only someone who drove the car could ever enter here. But that was only the tip of the iceberg. The car was what I called a smart car. It was fully equipped with pretty much any function you could think of.