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Faceless_Venerable

Faceless_Venerable

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2020-10-07 BeigetretenAscension Island
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  • Faceless_Venerable
    Faceless_Venerable4 years ago
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    Good Good

  • Faceless_Venerable
    Faceless_Venerable4 years ago
    Antwortet auf Kingibo

    it was my loss

  • Faceless_Venerable
    Faceless_Venerable4 years ago
    Antwortet auf Kingibo

    i guess he really can grow into an enormous giant that may not be containable or detainable by the military. I guess by the time the military really comes, he already wouldve become a force to be reckoned with. But then there is also another method to detain him. By capturing his parents and friends. However, I’m sure it will end as a failure considering the commander’s personality and the plot armor

  • Faceless_Venerable
    Faceless_Venerable4 years ago
    Antwortet auf Kingibo

    Of course he wont be op from the start. It says not in the synopsis but in the novel that this ancient god race could grow indefinitely and that they could even reach and pluck the moon. they can but for now, he cant. you cant expect a three meter tall person to pluck the moon

  • Faceless_Venerable
    Faceless_Venerable4 years ago
    Antwortet auf Kingibo

    I did and it said he has the ‘potential’ to reach for the moon not now. A genius can’t do shit if they are restrained from young

  • Faceless_Venerable
    Faceless_Venerable4 years ago
    Antwortet auf Kingibo

    This is a special person dumbass. Of course they would pay attention to him in the end. If only a minority of people got it which was most likely, they would of course research these special people. And of course they would have the ability to capture them. You think the military can’t do anything to a person just above 3 meters? Even if he grows and becomes 10 or so meters, they would still have the ability to capture him with both force and trickery.

  • Faceless_Venerable
    Faceless_Venerable4 years ago
    Antwortet auf Kingibo

    That just makes it more likely dumbass. You think the gov has no brain, they will sacrifice one or even thousand for the well being of the country.

  • Faceless_Venerable
    Faceless_Venerable4 years ago
    Kommentiert

    Thx for the chapter

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  • Faceless_Venerable
    Faceless_Venerable4 years ago
    Kommentiert

    There are some grammar mistakes and sometimes, its hard to read but its readable. It generally is a good novel and the only criticism I have to say is that the chapters are too long. You can divide them into several chapters and I’m sure it will become much more interesting. There are cases where it’s exciting but the long passages of texts make the excitement go away and make one bored instead. So I really suggest you to sepaeate them into several pieces. This way, your chapter count and update stability will increase and more chapters and better update stability would mean more readers.

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  • Faceless_Venerable
    Faceless_Venerable4 years ago
    Kommentiert

    Thanks for the chapter

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