Gato_Bolado

Have Suna sign a contract that establishes a puppet government while forcing them to surrender their poison techniques and much of Sasori's old puppet collection, as well as imposing a debt they will have to pay for years, we will also require one of Kazekage's children to be taken hostage until all monetary debt is paid, at least that's what I would do if I had to choose something.

I was really quite excited when I saw the ability of Fire Force, it's something simple but extremely powerful, but unfortunately it will probably barely be used because of the restrictions imposed...

the normal Mangekyo is already considerably powerful, besides, the protagonist would not have the ability to learn magic? what can happen if he he heals himself whenever he uses the magekyo? he can severely lessen the damage that the mangekyo will bring, perhaps even totally nullify this disadvantage

Konoha came out relatively unharmed, but we still have the subject of Shukaku to deal with, plus, Hiruzen must probably have lost much of his combat ability even if he is healed in the future.

I agree with absolutely everything, take the torches!

I understand, so that's how Asta will die in this fanfic...

I fully trust that it will be fantastic, in fact, I hope you get better soon.

It sounds really interesting, many Pokemon fanfics already start with the protagonist as a powerful coach, a gym leader or a champion, but I feel there's still a lot to explore on this topic, although it would be fun to read the protagonist's Pokemon adventure, the fanfic style I mentioned earlier allows the author to be much more flexible in his story (I also found it interesting that the system shows that even if the protagonist is a champion, he. It's probably the weakest champion there is, making room for future improvements, it's like saying the protagonist is at the top, but only at the lowest possible layer of the top.)

Honestly I wonder this whenever I go through this story, Fanfic was already having useless and bad chapters with little or no breakthrough in the story, and now we can say that it's really abandoned, not that the story was minimally exciting for the last 20 chapters, but it's still sad.

Incredible chapter as always, I might feel sorry for El Melloi, but he did totally for deserving, I wonder if the protagonist will try to get some true magic in this war, because through it he can technically annul his contract with Alaya, after all an immortal being cannot die, but I doubt that Alaya would let him do it so easily, besides that although it would be very interesting to see a true magic being used, she can make the protagonist very OP. Too fast, and since I want this story to be long, I don't know how it would help in this respect, because making the protagonist too strong risks leaving the story monotonous.