It's fine bud, no need to apologise, just thought I'd point it out as a way to help :)

Just a small observation, how can Ray be ten, and his mother still be pregnant with his sister when only 6 years separate them, also his sister in a previous chapter mention that their dad never came back, which implies she had interacted with him prior to his disappearance from the emotion she showed, just an observation for continuity.

Yo where is the rest of this chapter and what happened to the next few chapters, why are they basically non existent, it was about to get interesting, can someone explain???

Please please please release more chapters alittle faster, I'm itching to read what happens 😅

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

I need this one as an anime, it's so good I cant stop reading, I've spent a month hold myself back so I could binge the last 60 chapters, I need to be able to watch this, my own mind can make the images of the pages but I need the official thing so I can commit it to memory, this and My Dragon System, need it so much

I have a feeling Ray is gonna appear and be evolved, seems like that's where the story is gonna go, I have a feeling, he defeats the Shadow ant and then after recovering does some last week hunting, possibly even finding his old body as he goes to the battle in the shadow lands, its was hinted at when bliss mentioned it out of the blue, a little shoe horned perhaps but not a bad decision, this needs to be made into an anime, I would die to watch this and My Vampire System become animes watching as the stories play out infront of me

love the book, have been for the last few weeks, it's really good, just a small note though, shouldnt Quinn have received some EXP for Peter defeating those 2 vampires that he turned into wights??? Or is there a distance limit??? and since he killed them does he receive more than than you would think like 2000 or so or is it going to be an arbitrary amount????

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

I started reading this around 8ish at night and I ended up 65 chapters in and before I realised it was 5 in the morning, you are doing a great job dude, but question, why are the first 65 chapters free and the it starts to ask for coins, is it to get you hooked, so you will want to pay for something you are enjoying or a sly way of the system to get money by going "Hey sorry but if you wanna keep going we are gonna need you to pay up or no more book for you???"