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TheNeorav

TheNeorav

Lv3

A NOBODY

2020-10-03 BeigetretenIndia
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  • TheNeorav
    TheNeorav1yr
    Antwortet auf TalentlessCarin_

    Thank you for the review my friend!

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  • TheNeorav
    TheNeorav1yr
    Verschickt

    The story has a good head start with the hero being a mafia boss and the first chapter shows promise that this has the potential to be a good read.

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  • TheNeorav
    TheNeorav1yr
    Antwortet auf Tenzing_Choeying_1002

    Sure thing man

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  • TheNeorav
    TheNeorav1yr
    Verschickt

    Mandatory author's shameless 5-star self-appreciation. Well, Well I am back with a new story but this time with a proper plan and plotting. What you can expect: I) A ruthless Main character with a hollow heart (No morals pursued in order to achieve his goal.) II) Vicious schemings III) Intricate world building IV) Steady upload schedule V) Solo (If you like Harem then this ain't for you.) Disadvantages of the book: 1) My first language is not English so expect some grammatical errors. ( I will improve slowly in this dept) 2) I don't know, comment your thoughts on the other flaws you see.

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  • TheNeorav
    TheNeorav2yr
    Antwortet auf ihavesmallPP

    yes will be continuing soon but the story will go through editing (which might potentially reduce the harem influence in the story and focus on only the story) though the plot stays the same. Currently busy with my job so will take time to restart a schedule to publish chapters.

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  • TheNeorav
    TheNeorav2yr
    Antwortet auf kweba

    I don't understand what you are asking about? is this about the current chapter? Would be easier if you inserted a context

    Ch 19 19. Powerless
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  • TheNeorav
    TheNeorav2yr
    Antwortet auf Astral_k

    Currently scheduled 1 chapter per day but will be going for two chaps later on since I am going for a job.

    Ch 1 1. Criminal
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  • TheNeorav
    TheNeorav2yr
    Antwortet auf TheAldrich

    Can you elaborate further? What do you sense dumb?

    Ch 46 46.TRUST
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  • TheNeorav
    TheNeorav2yr
    Antwortet auf Justmethinking

    Grendon is a transcendent and the general of the central continent his brother is the emperor of the central continent.

    Ch 216 216. The end of war(2): Divine intervention
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  • TheNeorav
    TheNeorav2yr
    Antwortet auf Justmethinking

    According to my outline, there are things to appear soon... Just don't want to spoil, it'll be cool

    Ch 213 213. The War of Chaos Mainland (9)
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  • TheNeorav
    TheNeorav2yr
    Antwortet auf Ziond
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  • TheNeorav
    TheNeorav2yr
    Antwortet auf Ziond

    Yeah there is and I've already replied to your previous chapter comment with the link

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  • TheNeorav
    TheNeorav2yr
    Antwortet auf Ziond

    There are some scenes but they appear after 50 chaps and btw thanks for the review.

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  • TheNeorav
    TheNeorav2yr
    Antwortet auf Deultimate

    Who? If you are talking about the mc I'd suggest you to soldier on for atleast 60 chaps

    Ch 25 25.TWO PROPOSALS
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  • TheNeorav
    TheNeorav2yr
    Antwortet auf Damein_Jaschke_1980

    Indeed I just messed the numbers up.

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  • TheNeorav
    TheNeorav2yr
    Antwortet auf Damein_Jaschke_1980

    He lost one after fighting Akaysh and Astaroth used barrier magic with the remains of his power to protect his body from getting eaten by the beasts.

    He just didn't want to reveal that he possesses fourteen lives. It is not a game where he can resume from where he left off. And going through that pain surely made him fear death. Plus he cannot reveal everything unnecessarily. Some things were meant to be kept secret to avoid unnecessary troubles.
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  • TheNeorav
    TheNeorav2yr
    Antwortet auf Damein_Jaschke_1980

    Thanks for pointing out. I messed up with the years again.

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  • TheNeorav
    TheNeorav2yr
    Antwortet auf Damein_Jaschke_1980

    It did work...

    'Astaroth will not be waking up any time soon... I need to train and become stronger regardless of any reason... I died... I fucking Died... It was nothingness... I can't understand what it was... Is that what death is? I feel like I was erased from everything.' 
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  • TheNeorav
    TheNeorav2yr
    Antwortet auf

    Thanks for commenting man

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  • TheNeorav
    TheNeorav2yr
    Antwortet auf The_First_Fable

    Do you mean his name? Loga-Nathan

    "I am Loganathan. it's nice to meet you. Are you perhaps new here?"
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