LeoLyonWriting
Hey! I’m currently writing a fan story about My Hero Academia and possibly more! I post 1-2 Chapters a day from Monday-Saturday! I take Sundays off to do revisions of previous chapters.
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That last one was a weaker body double, the one he blasted into the sun was the real one.
A question Gorgophone will find out the answer to in mere moments
I MAY at least tone stuff down just a tad bit potentially though?
This chapter I might honestly get rid of or at least change it
Gear Five will be Paranormal Liberation War Tomura level, and Gear Six will be Final Battle Tomura level (excluding when he does unlock it being he’s not used to it yet)
It comes close being his is that Violet color, his would be the strongest, but in terms of an actual fight, his sister would win being she has more experience and has mastered some of her Gears.
Indeed, I’m gonna explain how he obtained it most likely in that chapter there. I’v currently stopped after the final battle stuff to see what I can add in between these chapters to make it a lot more girther in terms of content and pacing.
Gear F O U R (also, the later chapters that go over the Paranormal Liberation War stuff is spoiler heavy with stuff from chapter 362! I’m rewriting the “War Rages on! Leonidus Arrives!” Chapter as well
Just a quick little clarification for the limit/stamina stuff! It’s at a max of 2 hours because of total constant and the training he did
T h a a a a a t will be changed! He would’ve had it until things started cooling down
That one is a toughy to explain, it basically "is" special effects, however, the blade itself is actually the main reason behind why everyone can see it. Since his Nichirin Sword didn't come from the real world but the Seventh Plane, it has properties to it (reality changing ones) that allows those effects to be visual.
He should have indeed, if not, I can always go back and correct it!
That is exactly what inspired this fight
I just added a thingy for that! It'll be around roughly 2 hours given that he's able to use total constant PLUS the training he did at the camp each day.
I might actually go through and do something like that. I kinda feel as though something like this wouldn't have much of an impact on the story itself.
No problem! I honestly want people to point stuff out like that, being I tend to forget the things I write at times 😅
Good point, I should add that here, I believe I added that in a later chapter
He does try, it’s just that in Gear Two, he would easily eliminate his opponent
That guide is super old, in this one he doesn't lose any of his memories, and is not 1/2 Demon. He DOES have the Breathing Styles still, although it's now limited to Water Breathing, Thunder Breathing, Beast Breathing (yet to be written) and Hinokami Kagura.