Noel??? (the named was used a few chapters ago as well)

... following the scent*

struck Ragna's* shield,

suspicion should be suppression

... a bunch of tier 1* explorers ...,

the beasts should not* be able to create it.

yeah, context suggests it's the mule. Kind a surprised that he isn't titled as a black market dealer.

Referring to oneself in the third person usually isn't the best way. Try- ... that the impact of faking his death would have greater effect than he could imagine.

quit = to leave or

Would rate it as more a PG - 13 since a lot of direct language and situation was avoided. Flow and and overall cohesion of scene went well.

Well. At least they weren’t worried about having clean underwear at their passing.

It was a pop stack operation not push (order in which the souls got modified).

Ding Ding Ding... give the man a prize..

While his IQ and Str build is good, there should be a reason why the perception stat is the most expensive to raise. Betting that at a certain point in perception there will be some aether skills or vision activated.

Nahhh, Army of Darkness. Ash : Alright you Primitive Screwheads, listen up! You see this? This... is my BOOMSTICK!

Why do I feel Luo Wei's last question should have been colored in pink.

No mention if his quest to upgrade the branch office got cancelled.

The porcelain goddess is a great source of inspiration and mind clearing.

May the "next chapter" be lit for you... Amen

group favorite = mascot (cute)