Alice_A_Kavanaugh

This is the official version and (I hope) this one will have no more changes. A full look.

This is the first sketch of Gary Bynum, the main character of the story. Soon I will be uploading some more detailed sketches that better illustrate the character.

Hello to all who have supported this story and continue to do so. It makes me very happy. I have started to rewrite the story and I am very happy with the result I am getting, so I hope you like it too. I have made some arrangements in the plot that you will notice as I progress and yes, now everything is well organized and planned. Sorry for the inconvenience above :C I hope you enjoy these adventures together with the protagonist and that the events surprise you as much as they surprised me while I was imagining them :D Be patient with the story as it is unfolding. I hope to provide illustrations for you soon for a better understanding. Sincerely, A.A.K

From what I have read so far I have to say that I am quite impressed. First of all, the narration is very good and I must say that the personality of the protagonist is very funny and well accomplished. The plot is interesting, the setting catches my attention and the attitude of the protagonist to her reincarnation is really funny. It is a 100% recommended story for those who like an isekai ... different? Totally.

The story is quite interesting. It mixes in a fun and attractive way two themes that attract a lot of attention: video games and zombies. It's like ordering a zombie apocalypse at home and not being able to stop until it's finished ... then you ask what's next? It is refreshing and very well built placing us in the video game without any problem. Furthermore the characters are charismatic and reflect a very credible reality.

Thanks, I'm still working on the title, it's difficult to put a good one on it :(

I have read this story it has taken me a bit to assimilate everything ... it is simply fun, original and simple. The protagonist is sent to a fantasy world after a rather irritating goddess slays him, literally with lightning; And that's where we say, what does it have besides a too funny start? Well this protagonist making use of his desire for compensation for ... killing him? he asks the goddess for nothing more and nothing less than a harem of catgirls! It is a funny story that makes us laugh on more than one occasion with crazy situations. Tracking down this perverted guy is 100% recommended.

The story has an intriguing beginning, starting with showing every aspect of the protagonist quickly bringing us into context. The narration and description is good, especially to understand what is happening and what the protagonist sees. The statistics are well explained giving a good playing environment. It also has a certain mystery that prompts you to continue reading to discover what happens and who is responsible for the events.

The whole story seems very interesting to me. The main characters are well built, showing the typical optimism of their age in the face of problems and thinking that nothing could really go wrong. The plot is original and, although it takes quite common elements like the teenage heroes chosen to save an alternate world, it copes with the creation of a mysterious and solid place in terms of explanations.

thnks