does the mc have any abilities? or is he just a normal human?

shes from a different village and since he will fight in the third ninja war if he gets with a sand ninja it would be harder to write because why would any of the higher ups let him marry her when she probably killed lots of leaf shinobi. Also since shes from the sand whos village only has one kekkai genkai, the sand village higher ups wouldnt let her go since there losing a way to strengthen their village.

poor susan

cant asterion use his innate technique to create a spirit that uses the magic from the ley lines to strengethen all parts of hogwarts so even if the barrier goes down again hogwarts wouldnt be defenceless? it would give him a lot of fame in britain.

thats actually quite a lot compared to a lot of other marvel stories so dont worry about it.

its been two weeks

the only people who know that before naruto is the other tail beats and the sage of six paths, but hiruzens just casually calling him kurama and noone else is wondering whos he talking about?

the story's probably one of the best Naruto fanfics I've read on this app but the problem is that the constant amount of grammar mistakes make it worse and ruin the immersion like they call the nine tails kurama, call root "ne", calling the MCs mum the wrong name and just swapping words around. author please proof read your chapters before you post them

whats the original?

hades

kys you disgusting pedo

tbh i like ur way better the guy seems annoying from the way he speaks to the rob

the wifes of the lords are called lady" " not mrs mrs mr and ms arent used in GOT you can use ser for men aswell

u need to double check your chapters before u upload them because theres a lot of easy to change mistakes like calling aurors oros and other basic things

u need to double check your chapters before u upload them because theres a lot of easy to change mistakes like calling aurors oros

fast progression

is this on hiatus?