Mr_cats_eyes

God on you for taking a break so you dont get burnout

Pov of other caracters is all well and good as long as it doesnt happen too often. Beacause then its just confusing and the story starts to halt.

Revenge is best served cold and calculated, God job rewriting chapters not many go back and edit chapters. Even when they feel like they made a mistake keep up the good work.

I hope cognitron will not die Thanks for chapps

Thanks for the chapter

"I'll try to be open-minded and trust you on this. I sincerely hope what you're thinking of works. But just so you know, if it doesn't work, I will comment 'What did I say?' one time. Just kidding. Maybe you will convince me otherwise and make me reconsider my opinions on the matter. Well, I can hope, right?"

Five stars since I'd feel bad about dropping the novel's overall rating when there are so many bad novels with 5-star ratings by 12-year-olds who don't know any better. I love your novel's concept, the main character, and how the story is progressing. I just wanna make a request from the bottom of my shriveled raisin of a heart: please, for the love of all existence, do not make a harem. I've never, ever in my myriad of years reading, read a single good story with a harem or someone with more than one lover. So if you ever add romance and a partner, add just one, please. It's not that I have something against people who have a relationship with more than one partner in real life, but that I haven't seen someone ever write a good novel about someone having this type of relationship. And please make them equal in the relationship if you decide to do so. Sincerely, MCE

At first i thought that it was gonna be just another bad Legendary Mechannic clone but i must admit. This is gold and this story has amazing potential. I hope he becomes friends or reaches a cooperative realationship with the AI and uses it in his strategy but do what you feels best author since im not a writer a good one atleast I cant wait for the next chapter

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I love this storys intresting world concept and the main caracter but theres been no updates after 24 days and the writing qualitys not the best but its still really good and so far it has kept me intrieged and makes me want more