Killjoy4Life

He not only won he won with style.

I think calling him the gojo of sakamoto days is a bit much, maybe the yuki tsukumo or yuta okkotsu a high end talented combatant with either completely realized or near completely manifested potential but not quite gojo.

Overall not a bad fanfic for how it is written but the number of libertys it takes borders between gary sue and shameless how right everything goes for the mc, but for all this it is still well written I just wouldn't recommend it to anyone that cares about natural development or consistency with the canon version. I am not going to keep reading but I don't regret reading the first 18 chapter this just is not my cup of tea.

That statement physically hurts me.

I think you went a bit overboard with the technology even perturabo had difficulty expanding space with his non- Euclidian geometrics during the horus heresy and it was fitted in konrad curze flagship the idea of them doing that but on a frame of armor is just absurd, otherwise I like how the story is shaping up so far.

Justice for Mogh!

Justice For Mohg!

This is hilarious and I love that you included it.

How many children does he have at this point.

Is there a reason riser is suddenly very abrasive towards his family I'm not sure if I missed something while reading or if I did not read between the lines of there interactions well but this seems kind of out of nowhere.