WriterSim13

I will now be uploading 14 chapters a week, that means 1+ chapters a day. Updates will usually be 2 chapters a day, but if I only upload 1 that means one of the other days will get an extra chapter. Written: 30/06/2021 Hiatus is over you guys! Get ready for more action-packed shenanigans and misadventures! Written: 01/06/2021 Extremely sorry but this will be on hiatus for a couple of days while I sort out some irl issues. I'll upload the same amount of chapters as the days I missed once I get back though! Written: 24/05/2021

The story has a unique narrative style, and although chapters are much shorter than most other stories, and some are just A/N fillers, the story is still quite interesting.

The story is interesting and progresses nicely, but is hindered in quality by the large amount of grammatical errors. If these are taken care of, this story has a lot of potential to grow and become much better.

Lol maybe she IS the ghoul

Thanks for your support!

Plot is interesting, but the use of present tense narration feels off to me, and the large amounts of dialogue with not enough description in between makes visualizing the story hard. With a little work, this story can easily become much better. Keep up the good work.

An interesting plot furthered by good writing. Although system fantasy stories have become an increasingly common staple, hopefully the author will be able to distance this story from others.

Thanks! I'll keep doing my best to show the readers my story instead of just telling them about it with my writing!

Thanks!