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To me, you're already a renowned author!
Before, it said that its destructiveness was on par with D grade skills, now its E rank?
I think so? And what’s LoHS?
I love the story, and would be overjoyed if you continued it, but if you’re not sure how to continue it or if you don’t feel like you want to continue it, then don’t. It is entirely up to you if you want to finish it or if you want it to go on an indefinite hiatus or something similar. I will respect your choice, no matter what you decide.
Can you at least tell us the original ending?
Qie Xieling? What's he doing there?
Thank you for creating this! When I came here on a whim, I don't know what I was expecting, but you exceeded all of my expectations and more! This is an amazing start to an awesome fan-fiction! Please upload more chapters! I am anxiously waiting!
I forgot... Is Arcadia the world in-game or something?
Is the (Equip) basically asking her to equip it? Or is it saying that it's already equipped. In which case I suggest you add a 'ped' on the end of the (Equip) to change it to (Equipped) and add more clarity. Or it truly is asking her to equip it, in which case I think she's a bit odd to not equip the items. But hey! She can do whatever she wants to!
I think instead of 'forgotten', you should change it to 'lost count of' just for more grammatical sense. Or, at least, I think it would make more grammatical sense. You don't have to change a thing if you don't want to!