PreciousDane

I love the wordings.

sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo The story is interesting and yeh of course full of mysteries ... first 2 chapters yet there's a lot of questions that needs to be answered.

WERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

Nice parenting huh XD

I can sense any sort of foreshadowing here hm

Hmm... interesting

I enjoyed reading the story. The flow of the narration is on-point, easy-to-read, and has less errors when it comes to technicalities. May the author continue writing this story. <3

I enjoyed reading the story. The flow of the narration is on-point, easy-to-read, and has less errors when it comes to technicalities. May the author will continue writing this story. <3

I enjoyed reading the story. The flow of the narration is on-point, easy-to-read, and has less errors when it comes to technicalities. May the author will continue writing this story. <3

First, I want to commend how the author chose to make the synopsis short, yet catchy. Second, the narration is quite short, but I know the author will improve overtime.