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If I was the mc, I would kill her.. I don't need someone who has the thought of killing me alive and breathing..

I like this one, although the soul is different, he still acts as white beard or you can just say, his current character didn't deviate from the original. The only difference is that he knows what will happen but all in all he is WHITEBEARD!! Keep up this book. I only hope that this is not a harem and hope that there is no romance in it.

I think I may stop reading here. The flow is quite alright but the words are very cringy. My dark heart can't take distasteful words. all in all this is trash for me. Good luck to my fellow readers reading this..

Hmmnnn…. This is not a great fanfiction for me. First, the mc is not cool. No matter how the author portrayed the mc as a cool person, it was simply tragic. Second, the monologue writing, the words, action. The flow of the plot is quite decent for the most part, its just when i read it, it does not give a sense of fulfillment. I read some amazing novel and fanfiction before this one, great and mature wordings, nice grammar, great plot, great twist and the last thing i want no romance. Which is why reading this gives me a downcast feeling and dissapointment. Anyway, better luck with your book. Hope you can bring something amazing for me to read. I stop reading after their introduction in the first day of highschool. I can’t take the cringeness when i read it….

The grammar is horrible…

Fuck!! GooDbye trash novel!!! Fuckin’ hate harem…. maybe its because i dont wanna see women flockin’ around the mc like a bunch of fools, it sounds like a piece of slut…

Nice i like this way of thinking… not some stupid mc who thought that although they have these system or cheats they dont have to think beyond the box or they are complacement of what they have… tsk…

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Tsk!? Why!?? I really hate it if this going to have a romance fuckk!!!!!!

Dont like hats… weak!