I decided to split these last ten chapters between both greggan and ertimus rather than just put them together. I want you to see this journey from both perspectives because yes it is the same journey physically but both boys journeys are personal to them. There's gonna be gaps in greggans view because he's not there for some of the things happening. I decide to have Avery's fate left a mystery because Greggan wasn't there.

yea obviously hes's gonna ride them. but I feel like you need to read the rest to see what other stuff he does

this chapter is the last erlem chapter of this novel. we are coming to a close on the black dawn and I get ready to release the second novel in the series. I hope you enjoyed this story and i hope you enjoy the second novel i havn't names. the next one will come along much more quickly as iv written large portions already on paper and just have to transcribe them over. I hope you enjoy the series as much as i love to write about Thre'a. some of you will be confused as far as timelines so i must make everyone understand each book takes about two years time and each block of chapters are happening all at the same time. some of the characters i have only written a couple chapters for are not forgotten but their stories are not as important as others in the first book.

Yea the wording was off there, when i edit the book after i finish it will be changed. I may even remove a few chapters i feel may not be needed

Hes also a young autumn witch so he doesnt realize yes not unkillable.

Lol of course he’s gonna ride on the back of a water Steed lol wouldnt you?

Thanks! I really appreciate it. Sorry for the errors and mispellIngs i dont Have an editor. Iv been working on DeVeloping every Part of the workd, From the civilized thre’a, to the southern coast of la’velle and the continent to the east. Hopefully you guys enjoy this book and want to read the second. This book will have 70 chapters before i move to the second one

Thanks for reading! I hope you Enjoy the story

Every person has a dIfferent Ability when they get their super bodies. but the baby having it should be a dead givE away

Also you can come back to my work and ill give you my nUmber lol

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These tiny chapters are just strewn together. I didnt even realize he was in the fourth god sanctuary until hafway through 1398

I feel like he rushed through these just to Up his chapter count. Most of these could havw been combined to be one or two chapters.

Wait what? These Tiny chapters dont make sense and has me lost. Where did these sheep come from. did he go to the fourth gods sanctuary? What

I stopped reading this fan fic. There is no character devrlopement or a progression in the storyline. Why do you think your main character has to be op, overall this is drivle masquerading as a fan fic. You do not take on a beloved work if you aren’T adding substance to the Origonal works. there is no substance here. Its Unimaginative Unoriginal and uninteresting.

Lol thanks for the fix. sadly enough some stuff slips through. I’m currently working on Three novels and this one is on the backburner most of the time. im also writing a novel irl so im doing alot of writing. feel free to Check out my other novels The black dawn and Dragonsfate- The swift and the savage

I love true epic fantasies, most of my current work is in fact epic fantasy and would love for you to read my work The Black Dawn. we need more epic fantasy With characters who are Not insanely powerfuk and op.