Yueliang_Haizi

Note:Story, would be interesting, if not for making the character change traits every now and then such as being social than not social or disliking something then actually liking it two paragraphs later. Very inconsistent. But most annoying of all if the constant taking of God’s name in vain. You have a pretty decent vocabulary throughout the first 11 chapters why must you use God’s name in vain almost every 5 paragraphs?

I hope Liza becomes one of his wives, she seems interesting. I like her personality. I thinks she has yandere potential.

Note: please change the Tsundere in this chapter to Yandere. There is a massive difference between the two. You tend to explain it properly thereby making me think it is the translator’s fault or something but who knows. Thank you for your time.

Haha. I am the same way. Long hair is best.

I loved this novel until today. Now, I worry I might have to drop it because he is not married. Why must people ruin perfectly good books, and novels with such risqué things? 🥺

Personally, I believe that what is important is how you write it. Dungeon and labyrinth exploration can be interesting depending how you the author write it. As for me, I love the current progression from beginning to end. You keep us interested and having fun. I like the story especially since unlike others this novel is not focused on sleeping with everyone but on the actual lives of each person. Great job. Keep up the great work.

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

This book is written amazingly well and I love the way the author wrote it. Your world building, plot and story are truly wonderful. Hopefully you also add more pictures of the characters later but for this book is better than a 10/10 in my opinion.

I love this novel from beginning to end. Aside from the sexualized aspects, this book is amazing. There is well described magic systems, technology, even martial arts made in a way that make it real to the reader. The relationships are inspiring and so loving. (Especially toward the end.) unfortunately, things happen before they are married but it is hard to find novels or books with good morals with romance these days. Hopefully you have or will enjoy this novel as much as I have. It is truely sad that the author ended the story so abruptly, but I do absolutely love the way it ended. A perfect ending. Hopefully there will be more in the future.

I really hope to one day find someone who loves me as much as Andonara, Mystra, Sofie, and Stephanie love Roland. Such pure and wonderful love. Even if I had to remain chaste my whole life, their love and companionship would surely be enough.